Morning Child

by Harold Myra

PLOT SYNOPSIS (from the back of the book)

     The coronation of Queen Mela heralds a new era of courage and hope for inhabitants of the upper world. After bearing many sons, Mela gives birth to a daughter who was “chosen before the worlds were made.” She names the child Meleden, “The Maker’s Blessing.” When news spreads across the land that the infant is deaf, blind, and mute, fear of world judgement divides the citizens.

     The child has a remarkable effect on those who touch her. Some reject Meleden’s frailty and ultimately perish. Others are transformed by her “weakness” and inherit new worlds where darkness is banished forever.

Series: Children in the Night (3 of 3)

Age Recommendation: 13+

Warning: Scenes of mild violence

Faith Based: Yes

ISBN: 978-03104-6221-7

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THE BOTTOM LINE

One intriguing character with potential for a fascinating look at society is not enough to save this disjointed and ultimately predictable novel.

THOUGHTS…

After a terrific first book and an underwhelming second, Harold Myra had a chance to bring his series to a conclusion with a bang. He does not succeed in this endeavor. Morning Child begins on the right foot, introducing the most compelling character of the series, a downtrodden member of society who is anathema and intimately aware of how worthless she is. Her world view and cultural backstory provide the basis for a fascinating ride full of suspense and intrigue when it is allowed to shine. Unfortunately, more of the book is devoted to the other main character, a cookie cutter protagonist whose story is predictable and underwhelming. When their storylines intertwine, things get interesting for a few chapters. Then they are bogged down with childishly simple politics and “love stories.” An important character is killed off for no apparent reason (it does not advance the story or character arcs in any way), which is just as well since the plot does not rely on the characters anyway. They are just along for the ride as the apocalypse closes in and the book suddenly wraps up in a jarringly quick and thoroughly predictable manner. And then Mr. Myra’s series is over, leaving the bad taste of incompletion. Though I found some parts of this book to be enjoyable, it is mostly predictable, slow, and boring. If you’ve read Children in the Night (the first book in the series) and want more of the world, do yourself a favor and read it again. Twice. That will ultimately be better than investing time in the other two books of this series.

RANTS AND RAMBLES

    • This review was written long ago under a different format than I use now. I have posted it here in its original text.

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